My hot air balloon race

My hot air balloon race

I looked out of my rainbow balloon and I saw a sea of hot air balloons.  It was an amazing sight. But I couldn't get distracted I had to get on with the game. By the time we got to America my packet of chips had run out. I was starving to death so I asked my crew if they had any chips left .  One person out of my crew said “Do you want to win or not?’ Yes you're right I shouldn't worry about that stuff .Anyway who is going to stay up for the night shift? I stood up and said “How about ini mini mini mo whoever gets mo stays up. Right ! Let's do it.Sadly I was the one who had to stay up  for the night shift.

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is the full stops at the end of my sentences.

I need to improve on my spelling . We also made a google draw showing the things that we had to carry on the story.