PE&B Writing

This week we have been writing about space.    Here is a piece of my writing.

Space cafe

 New planet

My Goals

Today we did a google draw about our writing goals. Here are my goals.

What's in the lunchbox? poem

Today we wrote poems about Living things. 

We had to use an adjective, noun and verb for each sentence. 

Here is my published poem.

   

Colour poem

This week we have writing poems about our house colour. my house colour is red.
Here is my work

Environmental writing

We sketched our bean plants that we grew in class. We then wrote words around the outside to describe the bean plant. We had to use these words to write a piece of descriptive writing. We then cut out our picture and glued it on to your writing. Here is my writing.

Christmas Tree

Today we wrote a poem about a Christmas tree and we sketched a tree.

Here is my work.

Grandparents poem

Grandparents Poem

Last week we had our Greats and Grands day. We wrote poems for our grandparents. Here is my poem about why my grandparents are so special.

My Nana has tablets at her house and lets me play on them when I ask her.

My Nana bakes yummy baking for me.

My Nana takes me to the beach and swims with me.

My Nana goes to town with me and lets me spend $10.

 

BY SAM

Here is a photo of us on Greats and Grands Day.

How to make a paper

This week for writing we have been learning about procedural writing here is what I have been learning.

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Fathers Day Writing

 This is a poem that I made about my dad.

My Dad

My dad is as warm as a fluffy teddy bear in my bed.

My dad is as cool as  a gangster in town.

My dad is as strong as a gorilla lifting a big tower.

My dad is as tough as superman wrestling a bad guy.

My dad is as angry as hulk smash fighting a super villain.

 

BY Sam

Kauri

We have been learning about Kauri die back. We sketched a kauri tree and wrote a poem about it. Here is mine.

Golf

We have been learning Golf.

I liked Golf.

I am good at Golf.

I am good at Golf

ASB get wise

A few weeks ago we had Marlon from ASB come and teach us about money and how banking works. Here is agoogle draw about what I learnt. 

Animal town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is punctuation.

I need to improve on my spelling.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

I was so bored sitting on that hard bumpy seat until finally Mr Stripes walked over and said, “that giraffe is speeding with a couple of gangsters in that yellow van over there!”

I said, “right where are these people I have been hearing about?” "Just across the road there, replied Mr Stripes. I put my glasses on to see where the yellow van was. I gave them a ticket and they drove off to New York City. I turned around with a big smile on my face and went home to make banana on toast. Once I got there I looked in my fruit bowl but there were no bananas left so I got in my car. Once I got out of my driveway a tree fell over so I hopped out of my car and walked to the shop.

My hot air balloon race

My hot air balloon race

I looked out of my rainbow balloon and I saw a sea of hot air balloons.  It was an amazing sight. But I couldn't get distracted I had to get on with the game. By the time we got to America my packet of chips had run out. I was starving to death so I asked my crew if they had any chips left .  One person out of my crew said “Do you want to win or not?’ Yes you're right I shouldn't worry about that stuff .Anyway who is going to stay up for the night shift? I stood up and said “How about ini mini mini mo whoever gets mo stays up. Right ! Let's do it.Sadly I was the one who had to stay up  for the night shift.

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is the full stops at the end of my sentences.

I need to improve on my spelling . We also made a google draw showing the things that we had to carry on the story.

The pou

As part of our writing programme we have been doing environmental writing. We had to sketch an object and as we were sketching we wrote down thoughts that we had. Then we wrote our thoughts down  as a poem. We cut out the sketch and added this to our writing.

MY ANZAC DAY Writing

We have been learning about  ANZAC day. We started to learn about it at the start of the term and we are finishing it off today. Here is my letter.